I don't understand why you resisting the "seducer" label so much :)) Just puff up your chest, thump it loudly and make a declaration "I'm irresistable ... and you know it!" LOL
You wanna take morality (a human creation) and use it to mask instinct :)) Never works - not even in the human reality... lol Unless you take all the fakeness that people display to actually be *real*
You write such simple but beautiful stories :) Really nice...
Happy birthday to your Amma... she's blessed to have you, I'm sure.
The chill of your bare skin
Bringing awareness of your death
I wish to forget all that and remember
Only the scent of oranges on your breath
Breathe once more for a moment
Just another little exhale
I wish to capture it for eternity
This breath that did escape
Liked this one...
Rrakhee,
Good to see you here after a long break. :) Glad you liked the story, even if the conclusion was flawed :))
Cheers
Dimwit
Sudha,
You may be right in your observations in certain conditions. But I like to think that people and relationships are deffy more resilient than pieces of mirror. That analogy doesn't quite work for me. I could be wrong :)
Also I don't think living out your own destiny should be an *unpardonable* act. Besides there were three people in this equation, why would only Sylvie's actions be unpardonable? Either all three were wrong, or no one was. Anyway, it's all academic at this point.
Thanks for your feedback.
Cheers
Dimwit
Match Made in Heaven
Usha,
Thanks for your encouragement.
Cheers
Dimwit
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